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Thursday, July 26, 2012
ESP and fantasy
When writing my YA fantasies, I've found I tend to look at paranormal abilities when casting my characters. I've maade use of the twin bond and expanded it to include telepathy so that not only can the twins in the Affinities Series ( formerly the Henge Betrayed) series can sense problems with their twins but can speak to them via telepathy. Paranormal has always fascinated me so I've also used other elements in my stories such as Pyrokenetics. That's the ability to set fires. There are stories when this is used in a bad way, but for my characters, this gives them the ability to start the campfire with little trouble and to use this for lighting their way in dark places. I've also given several characters the ability to control animals through the thought process.
While these kind of talents are considered psuedoscience, I've often considered acharacter having clairvoyance and able to glean things happening at a distance. To me exploring these talents gives me a springboard for developing a story line. Teleporting has been used by other authors to speculate about moving objects.
What about you do you find the idea of extrasensory perception a fascinating way to develop characters with abilities. Much of the talents I develop in my young characters have to do with their Sun sign abilities. Of all of these telepathy is my favorite one to use. Eventually I'll use them all.
Monday, July 23, 2012
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Friday, July 20, 2012
Finding Character Names
Several of the panelists agreed with the standard "what the character's name meant was important", even if no one else in the story knew the meaning of the name or even what their own name meant.
To put that much work into choosing a name is understandable for the major characters. But what about for the walkon characters? The ones that may only have one or two lines? The thing is, though, sometimes you never know how important a character may become. I've lost count of how many times I've heard about a minor character suddenly taking over the story. Sometimes that might mean renaming the character. Sometimes the name already in place works. But why take chances?
So where do you find character names? I still have six or seven baby name books and books about surnames from the days before the internet. Several of the panelists mentioned baby name books as well. There are websites for baby names and character names. Some of the websites, however, don't list as many names or meanings as my paper books. Some useful websites (unfortunately with ads) are Baby names and Baby Name Wizard. There are many others out on the web.
Several of the panelists listed how many foreign language dictionaries they have. I have Welsh, Anglo-Saxon, Latin, Russian, Spanish, German, and Swahili and used the Hungarian and Slavic dictionaries at the university library. Now, true, many of the words in a dictionary are not often used as names. When you're creating a new world (whether fantasy or science fiction), however, you can use the dictionaries as a starting point. Then, as several panelists also suggested, you change the spelling slightly.
One of my characters in Talking to Trees has such a name. But I decided to have a bit of fun with it after hearing complaints from nonfantasy readers about the long names in fantasy stories.
Jody looked around at the trees as she nibbled on the strip. "You know what I think, ah..." She still couldn't remember that girl's name. Till..will.. "Willow. I think we should--"The girl's eyes snapped open. "My name is Twylgalit. Not Willow. Not Gally. Twyl-gaaa-lit."
Jody was surprised. Why was she making such a big fuss? It was only a name. "Hey, sorry. It's only a name."
"But it is my name. My name is important to me. In the language of my people it defines me."
"It does?"
"'Twylgalit' means 'twilight wood.' It means I am the last of my people."
"The very last?" Jody shook her head. "Creepy."
Twylgalit studied her. "Doesn't your name mean anything? What is a jody?"
Jody shrugged. "I don't know. It was one of my grandmothers. Peter was named for one of our uncles. Thank goodness, otherwise we might have been stuck with some cute twin names."
"Twin names?"
"Names starting with the same first letter. Like...oh, Brittany and Brian. Actually, I think I'd rather be called Brittany. Or maybe Caitlyn. Then Peter would have been stuck with a 'C' name like Cedric or...Clarence." She snickered. "He would have hated that."
"Even if it was his name?" Twylgalit shook her head. "I do not understand."
"Whatever," Jody said. "Anyhow, your name is too long."
Twylgalit eyed her. "Brittany is just as long."
Jody rolled her eyes. Why doesn't she understand? "Okay, your name is too hard to remember. Can't I call you something else?" Jody tried to remember the name her twin had used. It was a type of fabric or a pattern-- "Peter called you Twyl. Would that be okay?"
The girl raised her head and slowly turned to look behind her.
Jody scowled. All this fuss about her name and now she wasn't even listening to her! "I said--"
"I heard." Twylgalit turned back. "It...it is acceptable." She lifted one foot. Clods of dirt fell away from it.
Jody continues to have name problems as they meet other characters.
She noticed the two green-skinned girls exchanging glances again. Jody had the impression they weren't saying something as well. "Hey, where's the other girl? Um, the tall one? With the leafy dress? What are your names, anyway?""You won't like them," said one.
"You don't like long names," said the other.
"Well, I've got to call you something," Jody insisted. "I'm Jody and she's Twyl."
"She is called Twylgalit," said the girl with the yellow-orange belt. "We heard you talking."
"You can call me Brittany," said the other girl. "I like the sound of that name."
"And I like Clarence," said the girl wearing the belt.
"I can't call you Clarence," Jody protested. "That's a boy's name."
"But I like it," the girl insisted. She looked over at the other girl. "Brittany."
"Clarence," said the girl now called Brittany. Both girls started laughing and pointing at each other.
I don't see what's so funny, Jody thought. She heard a muffled sound from Twyl, but when she glanced up at the girl, Twyl was studying the lights in the branches above them.
If you have a family in your story, sometimes names are passed down to honor family members. One of the panelists pointed out that, after his days of working for a credit agency, he recommends against naming a child for a living relative (as in the first and last name are the same) because nowadays that causes so many credit problems. But for a historical story, that would be entirely appropriate. I've been doing genealogical research on my own family and had never realized how often names were repeated. For example, I've got six Charleses and six Josephs. I finally linked the appearance of the Frank and Francis back to a great great grandmother, Franciska (or Francisca, depending on which census), and I'm sure if I ever find her parents' generation, I might find the relative that she was named after. Considering that she named her daughter Maria Franziska, there has to be a story behind that name. Throughout my family tree there were several generations in a row (grandfather, father, son, or grandmother, mother, daughter, etc.) with the same first name. Or, as with Maria, the name was moved to be the middle name. This is one of the times I would ignore the 'rule' of not having characters with the same name (or first initial) in a story.
Phone books used to be a useful resource to skim through, but perhaps that only applies to big city phone books. In small town Winona that means an overabundance of Polish, Norwegian and Swedish names. I used to be able to look through phone books for other cities at the public library, but that's no longer the case.
Because I worked at a university, I kept the commencement lists from graduations over the years. I have a good collection of first, middle and last names there to help me figure out what names work well together (and several examples of 'why would any parent would name a child that!').
Where do you find your character names? What is the most interesting name you've found?
Thursday, July 19, 2012
Should Children's or YA Books Contain Cuss Words?
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Wednesday, July 18, 2012
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Monday, July 16, 2012
Cosplay -- Dress-Up for Adults
This past weekend was San Diego Comic Con. This is a media convention, rather than a literary one, so lots of TV and Movie people show up, from all your favorite geeky SF/F/H shows. It's a HUGE event, and someday maybe I'll go.
Maybe someday I'll be invited.
Either way, the internetz have been buzzing all weekend long with updates, tweets, and pics. One of the things about these cons is that people Cosplay. What's that? Costume Play. Otherwise known as Adult Dress Up. Remember all those people who dressed like wizards for the Harry Potter book releases, or the movies? They were sort of Cosplaying. Most people when they cosplay at a con usually try to do some kind of role play as the character they are dressed as. You get your Darth Vaders and your Mals from Firefly and your Anime characters. If they were giving out candy it would be just like Halloween. Some of these costumes are really well done and you can tell they took hours-- all a labor of love.
I've dressed up for cons. Wore a Greek Chiton to promote the Library of Athena series. Put on a Victorian shirt, vest, and some cool-looking pink goggles to play Steampunk. I own a Queen of Hearts costume, complete with freaky, teased up red wig (think the Tim Burton version).
But if I were going to really cosplay a character, I'd pick this one:
See you next month!
Thursday, July 12, 2012
Editing and those tricky words
Accept (verb – I’ll take it) (See except)
All right (adj – agreeable;safe - two words preferred – one if you’re in a hurry)
All right (adv – satisfactorily – same as above)
[She was sick all right, but she’s all right now.]
All right (you all have the correct answer)
All ready (everyone is ready – two words)
Already (adv – prior to certain time – one word)
Affect (verb – influence) (See effect)
Allowed (verb – I’ll let you do it)
Aloud (adv - I can hear it)
Any more (I don't want any more food.)
Anymore (I don't want to do that anymore.)
Assume (verb – take for granted; take over debts, as in “She assumed when they
married, he would assume her debts.”
See also, presume.
Ball (noun – round toy; fancy dance)
Bawl (verb – cried - as in, didn’t get invited to the fancy dance)
Baited (verb – stuck a worm on a hook; harassed the fish)
Bated (verb – restrained, as in “with bated breath”)
Bath (noun – where you wash yourself with water)
Bathe, bathed, bathing (verb-act of washing yourself)
Bare, baring (adj – nekkid; getting nekkid)
Breath (noun – air inhaled)
Capital (noun – money)
Choose (verb, present tense – select)
Desert (verb – abandon)
Effect (verb – caused it to happen)
Except (prep – with the exclusion of, as in, “Everyone got a prize except me.”)
Exercise (noun – repeated muscle action)
Fair (adj - equal; beautiful)
Farther (to a greater distance)
Gait (noun – regular motion as in “horse’s gait”)
Guessed (verb – deduced)
Hail (noun – frozen rain)
Hear (verb – perceive sound; heed)
Hoard (verb – accumulate wealth)
Into (prep - enter – one word)
Its [NO apostrophe] (adj – possesses something)
Levee (noun – embankment to prevent flooding)
Lightening (verb – reducing weight, as in “lightening the donkey’s load”)
Loose (verb – set free, as in “loose the captive”)
May be (could happen – two words)
Past (noun – it’s over)
Peace (noun – we all like each other)
Pore (verb – examine carefully)
Presume (verb – to dare; to expect to assume)
Principal (adj/noun – main part; main man)
Rain (noun/verb – precipitation, or act of precipitationing)
Shudder (verb/noun – shiver; act of shivering)
Site (noun – location)
Tenet (noun – belief)
Their/theirs [NO apostrophe] (adj – belongs to them)
Were (verb – past tense of was)
Weather (noun/verb – atmospheric conditions; getting through same)
Whose [NO apostrophe] (adj – Which person does this thing belong to?)
Your/yours [NO apostrophe] (adj – belongs to you)
A word about: blond and blonde:
Webster says either is correct. Used to be that blond (adj) was preferred for male, blonde for female. Then some said blond w/o the “e” could be used for either gender, but blonde with the “e” was used as a noun. (The blonde walked into the room.) Now you can just do whatever you want with it.
About confidant and confidante:
Webster says either is correct, but confidante is preferred to describe female gender.
About fiancé and fiancée:
Webster says fiancé refers to man who’s engaged to be married; fiancée refers to woman who’s engaged to be married.
You don’t “try AND do” something; you “try TO do” something. Either you TRY to do it, or you DO it. Common usage, so OK for dialog. Not really correct for narrative.
Also, the use of me and I. Try this:
The water was too cold for Tim, John and me.
If you remove Tim and John, the sentence reads: The water was too cold for me.
Myself: Really there are very few times to use this word.
It was just Tim, John and myself against the monster.
Please - use gaze instead of eyes:
His eyes roamed over her ample bosom.
I hope this is error-free. If not, I beg off since I am typing without the use of one hand. LOL And, as usual, I am late getting this blog ready to go.
Bear, bearing (verb – carry; carrying)
Breathe (verb – inhale air)
Capitol (noun – where politicians go to figure out how to divest you of the above)
Chose (verb – past tense of choose)
Desert (noun – wasteland)
Dessert (noun – lands on your waist)
[Please remember first example and last example are pronounced the same.]
Effect (noun – result of causing it to happen)
The new guy effected a change, and the effect was positive.
Except (verb - excluded, as in “The prize-giver excepted me”)
Except (conj – on certain conditions, as in, “because I couldn’t get there except by boat.”)
Exercise (verb – exert, as in “exercise influence”)
Exorcise (verb - expel something evil)
Fare (verb – to do okay with whatever)
Fare (noun – use fee; food)
Is it fair to assume you will fare well on that fare?
Further (to a greater degree)
I would driver farther to further my education.
[These two now used interchangeably.
Gate (noun – device to keep above horse in the pen)
Guest (noun – man who came to dinner)
Hail (verb – greet)
Hail (verb – strike repeatedly, as in “hail blows on his head)
Hale (adj – not infirm, as in “hale and hearty”)
Here (adv – in this place)
Hear! Hear! If you mean to express agreement
Here! Here! If you want to catch the waiter’s attention
Hoard (noun – accumulation of wealth)
Horde (noun – those who will come to take your hoard)
In to (two words – nearly the same as above, but be careful)
The boy walked into his school room and turned his homework in to his teacher.
It’s [apostrophe] (contraction of “it is”)
It’s common knowledge a dog will chase its tail.
Levie (noun - what you pay for the embankment)
Lightening (adj – gradual brightening, as in “the lightening sky”)
Lightning (noun – bright flash/streak that comes before thunder)
Loose (adj – not attached, as in “loose change”)
Lose (verb - don’t know where it went)
Maybe (adv – perhaps – one word)
Maybe he is the one who may be chosen.
Passed (verb – went right by me)
Piece (noun – if your piece is bigger than mine, forget the above)
Pour (verb – cause to flow in a stream)
Fine line between assume and presume—avoid both; use your thesaurus.
Principle (noun – code of conduct)
The principal was a man whose principal principle was integrity.
Rein (verb – control, as in “rein in your horse”)
Reign (verb – rule; hold office)
Reign (noun – sovereignty)
Shutter (noun/verb – window covering; act of putting up window covering)
Sight (noun – something seen)
Cite (verb – to quote; to refer to)
Now that our site is in sight, please cite our reason for being here.
Tenant (noun – occupant)
There (adv – in that place)
They’re [apostrophe] (contraction of “they are”)
We’re (contraction of “we are”)
Whether (conj – implies alternatives, as in “decided whether to go or stay”)
Who’s [apostrophe] (contraction of “who is” – Who’s going to admit whose hat this is?)
You’re [apostrophe] (contraction of “you are”)
The water was too cold for Tim, John and I.
It would not make sense to say: The water was too cold for I.
Should be: It was just Tim, John and me against the monster. (Or, better yet: It was just me, Tim and John against the monster.)
His gaze roamed over her ample bosom.
Wednesday, July 11, 2012
Summer Reading... or not
But you know what, so are all of those other things.
Friday, July 6, 2012
What The Heck Is A Hernia Anyway?
To answer that, we first have to understand how our bodies are put together. Picture a hot dog or sausage. If you've ever seen them get made, you'll know that the meat for them gets put into a casing. The casing helps the hot dog or sausage keep the meat together and give it its shape.
What the casing does for the sausage or hot dog, our body does for us. But unlike hot dogs, humans are vastly more complex, so we tend to have a number of different types of layers keeping our bits in place. The idea, however, is the same.
Now picture a sausage in its casing, then see a pin and watch it make a small hole or tear in it. If you move the sausage around enough, some of the meat inside the casing will wiggle out. That bit of meat or fat that has escaped through the tear or hole in the casing is the hernia.
(And yes, these are MY insides! Us writerly types must use all that is presented to us for writing fodder. Yes, yes, we must.) Heh heh.
Wednesday, July 4, 2012
Happy Birthday, USA!
Finding a way to incorporate ghosts into the celebration of our country's birthday can be a stretch, even for someone like me. I was going to do a piece about all the ghosts from that period that haunt Philadelphia, and according to Dennis William Hauck's Haunted Places (The National Directory), there are quite a lot of them, from a headless Revolutionary War soldier who gallops down Allen's Lane with his severed head next to his saddle to the consortium of spirits who haunt General Wayne Inn. There are a lot of other haunted locations in between. And we probably don't even need to discuss how many historical figures are apparently running rampant in Washington, D.C. long after the end of their living years.