Showing posts with label pfc liberty stryker. Show all posts
Showing posts with label pfc liberty stryker. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Way, Way Overdue

Some time ago, Peggy Tibbetts and I exchanged books so that we could review each others' works. Peggy, being the gracious, thoughtful, and courteous type, posted her review of Saving Jake on this blog. Me, being somewhat scatter-brained and a bit, well, out of it, a great deal of the time, did not post my review of PFC Liberty Stryker. Until now. Apologies, Peggy.


Peggy Tibbetts’ PFC Liberty Stryker is an important story that is almost too grim to look at and too well written to look away. Set in the midst of war, Operation Iraqi Freedom, to be precise, the reader is invited into an intimate look at the life of a female army private. Be prepared. There is no gloss of any kind over this woman’s experience in a profession that is still overwhelmingly male. Pvt. Stryker’s life is based on survival: surviving boot camp and the inherent sexual abuse that is a part of that experience; surviving life in the harshness of the desert with bombs and bullets exploding all around; surviving the loss of friends and comrades that is war by definition; and finally, surviving the loss of her father and then the last of her innocence in one fell blow.

The adage “war is hell” is written in as a joke one soldier makes to another, but the author makes it clear that this is no joking matter. The hell of war in these pages is as inescapable for the reader as it is for Pvt. Stryker as the story is written in agonizing first person. The sentences are short and terse, fast-moving arcs that zip across the page like bullets themselves. Any sane person caught up in this mad and violent situation is going to become ill and Pvt. Stryker’s personal illness spills over into her physical condition, a condition that ultimately leads to her losing nearly everything in order to regain her own soul.

Tibbetts brings up the slogan of “shock and awe” as it applies to this horrendous conflict, then proceeds to apply it to her own story. Reading this book and not feeling shocked, not feeling awe at the writer’s ability to pluck you from the safety of your living room and into the field of battle, is an impossibility. PFC Liberty Stryker is the kind of book that will shift the way you look at war, at the military, and at our country’s place in the world. This book is necessary. 

I hope everyone who reads this will read the book. Peggy is one amazing writer, and it's well worth the journey.

Wednesday, April 25, 2012

PFC Liberty Stryker

Recently I had the pleasure of reading PFC Liberty Stryker, YA/Crossover Novel, by our own Peggy Tibbetts.



Paperback: 364 pages
Publisher: Lunatic Fringe Publishing (Jan. 21, 2012)
ISBN: 978-0967786841

Here is my review:

According to history, William Tecumseh Sherman stated “War is hell” during the American Civil War. Years have passed since then with many wars in our world. In the newspapers and on TV we hear about the men and women who fight and die in these battles. But do we really understand what they experience in foreign lands, away from family and home. Do we know the horrors they witness every day? I’ve always thought it’s sad that people cannot get along with one another, but never considered the gruesome reality of day to day life for our soldiers. Until I read Peggy Tibbetts’ novel PFC LIBERTY STRYKER, that is. Boy did the author open my eyes to the truth. I have to agree with Mr. Sherman.

After Libby Stryker’s father, who was career army, is killed at the Pentagon on 9/11, Libby joins the army and before long is in the desert of Iraq, seeing a side of war that only one who’s been there can believe. Death is everywhere and not just the soldiers but innocent men, women, and children as well. The author describes the scenes in such depth that the reader can almost hear the cries of pain, smell the stench of blood and bodies, and feel the terror in the air. Don’t be surprised if you cry a little. I did. I will warn you, also, that the language is raw and rough and not for the squeamish. Libby has a lot to learn about her fellow soldiers, and she soon discovers that sometimes those we trust the most are not what or who we believe them to be. The story is full of unexpected twists that show just how complicated war and people really are.

Author Peggy Tibbetts did her research. Her acknowledgment at the front of the book credits the many people who helped her get the details of PFC LIBERTY STRYKER just right. After reading this book, I think you’ll appreciate even more the sacrifices of our brave soldiers, to keep America, you and me, safe.

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Who is Peggy Tibbetts?

Where have you heard that name before?

Think Writing World. She was managing editor, columnist, and picture book workshop instructor at Writing-World.com.

Or SCBWI. Or The Write List. She is at Goodreads and Jacketflap. Oh yes, LinkedIn, too. And still on MySpace. She’s here and there and everywhere around the interwebs.

Friend her on Facebook.

Follow her on Twitter.

Remember Inkspot.com? She was Inkspot’s Children’s Writing Resource Editor. She was an associate producer of educational videos for Upper Midwest Films, and contributing editor for Children’s Magic Window magazine.

She is also a fervent blogger at From the Styx, Advice from a Caterpillar, and YA Authors You’ve Never Heard Of.

Tibbetts is the author of two middle grade novels, Letters to Juniper and The Road to Weird, and a YA/crossover novel PFC Liberty Stryker.


In their spare time Peggy and her husband, Tod manage the West Elk Multi-Use Trails on the Flattop Mountains for the White River National Forest. She and Tod enjoy hiking, biking, skiing, and camping with their beloved Malamute, Zeus, and Chihuahua mix, Pepé in the mountains of western Colorado, where they live.



Peggy welcomes your questions & comments at: peggyt@siltnet.net
Please refer all complaints to the Management


Peggy Tibbetts is the author of two middle grade novels, Letters to Juniper and The Road to Weird. She was managing editor and columnist at Writing-World.com. She has also worked as an associate producer of educational videos for Upper Midwest Films, contributing editor for Children’s Magic Window magazine, and Children’s Writing Resource Editor at Inkspot.com.

Happy Reading.

Saturday, February 11, 2012

Prepare to enter an alternate reality …


PFC Liberty Stryker is here.

Available in Kindle edition
at Amazon.com



Unlike anything you've ever experienced …

Libby Stryker joined the Army to avenge her daddy's death on 9-11 but it's nothing like she expected. Operation Iraqi Freedom takes her on a harrowing journey north with a mysterious Arab through bomb devastation, hot zones, and RPG attacks. A different kind of horror awaits Libby in Baghdad. Her past and present, and why it's all gone wrong, blow up in her face. Prepare to enter an alternate reality.

Review copies are now available in Kindle edition and PDF. Interested in a book review exchange? I will read and review your book if you read and review my book. Do you review young adult books for a blog or website? Please consider reviewing PFC Liberty Stryker. Email me, let's talk: peggyt@siltnet.net



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Monday, January 9, 2012

New book trailer!

Happy Twenty Twelve!

It’s a brand new year, and for me another book release. My next book, PFC Liberty Stryker is coming soon from Sisterhood Publications. I can hardly wait.

Read more about PFC Liberty Stryker

Check out the book trailer –



An amazing amount of time and effort goes into the making of a book trailer. My thanks to Brian Thornton and Ema Tibbetts for doing a brilliant job of bringing my vision to life.

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Monday, October 17, 2011

How do I know when to stop?

“The point of good writing is knowing when to stop.” ~ Lucy Montgomery

As I mentioned in my last post, I am working on the final edits for my next novel, PFC Liberty Stryker. Like every writer at this stage, I ask myself, “How do I know when to stop?”

Many writers believe it’s hard to know when to stop editing. Let’s face it we spend a hell of a lot of time revising our work. John Irving said, “Half my life is an act of revision.” If you’re like me, even after a book is published you see where you could have added a word or two, here and there. Oscar Wilde said, “Books are never finished, they are merely abandoned.” How depressing. I prefer to finish mine, thank you very much. Whether we abandon our books or finish them, at some point we do have to let go.

I have compiled a check list gleaned from years of editing my own and other writers’ works, and listening to what writers and editors say about revision. At each stage in the re-writing process I use the guidelines below to improve my story. This is my map to the finish line.

  1. Can you summarize the story in a sentence or two?
  2. Details: spelling, grammar, punctuation, capitalization, italics, formatting
  3. Is your main character an interesting person?
  4. Does she/he have flaws?
  5. Does your main character change throughout the story?
  6. Is every character necessary to this story?
  7. Have you chosen the best point of view?
  8. Does the beginning draw the reader in?
  9. Is there tension in this story?
  10. Does each chapter provide information that moves the story forward?
  11. Does every scene?
  12. Does your dialogue move the story forward, as in no idle conversations?
  13. Does everyone sound alike? Can readers tell who’s talking without dialogue tags?
  14. Is there unresolved conflict until the end?
  15. Does the story end where it’s supposed to?
  16. Do you like this story?
Coming soon: PFC Liberty Stryker
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Monday, September 19, 2011

New book, new cover

Some people get excited about new fall fashions. Writers get excited about new book covers.

Check out the stunning new cover for my upcoming new release PFC Liberty Stryker

Link


Natalie Collins
, my editor/publisher at Sisterhood Publications really outdid herself with this one.

For me it’s crunch time. I’m working feverishly on the final edits for PFC Liberty Stryker. We want to make the Kindle edition available before the holidays. I hear you, Christine Norris. There are not enough hours in the day. I need to clone myself.

Here's the blurb:
Liberty Stryker joined the army to avenge her dad’s death on 9-11 but it’s nothing like she expected. Operation Iraqi Freedom takes her on a harrowing journey north with a mysterious Arab through bomb devastation, hot zones, and RPG attacks. A different kind of horror awaits Libby in Baghdad. Her past and present, and why it’s all gone wrong, blow up in her face. Prepare for an alternate reality. PFC Liberty Stryker is unlike anything you’ve every experienced.
Curious? Read this advance review by blogger, Calista Cates-Stanturf:
"War is not what it seems” and PFC Liberty Stryker is beginning to take it personally.Suspend all rational thought of what should be and what you knew – “war is not what it seems”. Just ask PFC Liberty Stryker. Her father perished on 911 in the smoking rubble of the Pentagon. Now enlisted in the US Army to fight the War on Terrorism, PFC Liberty Stryker's world is turned upside down. As a POW smack dab in the midst of war torn Iraq, Libby witnesses the annihilation of the Iraqi people and American soldiers caught between war machines. It all ends in a series of twists and turns you and Libby never saw coming.

Author Peggy Tibbetts takes you on one young soldier’s journey from her homeland to a war torn country trying to survive the terror that once was and the unknown horrors that have become the fabric of daily life. A nation where she discovers all she has known until now is based on the half truths and lies of smoke and mirrors. PFC Liberty Stryker is a story of intrigue expertly woven to pull you in from the opening words and doesn’t let you go until you read the words, “The End.”

So compelling I read it twice and still couldn’t put it down.
Coming soon: PFC Liberty Stryker by Peggy Tibbetts

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